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Loves a b**ch
Chapter 2
Warnings: a bit of cursing, maybe some rape/smut in later chapters
I don't own sonic and co...(i don't know why people do these anymore..-.-)
Sonics pov
Stupid faker! I don't not act childish! I could of handled myself….I plonked myself near a tree and crossed my arms. It had been one crazy day. First, it started out way past cool; with the chilidogs and the running, but then scourge came. Why was he here? I hadn't seen him in ages…although I must admit; he's looking pretty handso-NO! Get a grip sonic! You like shadow! Aish, this is so confusing….anyway, then he pinned me to a tree; probably wanted to start a fight or something… and then shads came over and kicked him to the ground. Why did shads do that? Maybe their enemies or something. I lay against the tree and thought. How will I ever confess to shads that I like him!? I mean, were supposed to be enemies and there is no way he likes me like that. All these sad thoughts are making me hungry….I need a chilidog T_T

Shadows pov
Where was he?! I had been running for ages! I swear if the faker got himself in trouble- I stopped in midsentence when a saw a blue hedgehog sitting under a tree up ahead. Finally! If I don't hurry to the faker now scourge will catch up…I ran over to sonic replacing my worried expression for my usual angry one.
'Hey faker' I called out as casually as I could. There were butterflies in my stomach; this could be my chance to get more close with him!
'Hey faker…' sonic pouted and turned his head. He looked cute doing that but this was not the time, I could see he was still angry at me for earlier.
'I-I didn't mean to tell you to go away…or call you an idiot faker…I had some personal things to settle with scourge' I was NOT used to apologising to anyone….but sonic was worth it. I saw him widen his eyes and blush. Eventually a smile spread across his lips.
'Heh, apology accepted shads, Didn't think you had it in ya!'
'Hmph, whatever faker' I sighed in relief, it felt like a huge weight had been lifted off my shoulders. Suddenly a growl erupted from sonic stomach. I had to hold back a laugh; he was so cute! *cough* I mean, he looked silly. (I got to stop calling him cute.) Sonic laughed and rubbed the back of his head as we heard another growl.
'Let's eat.' I stated. I held out my hand to the faker waiting for him to take it. He looked at me bewildered for a couple of seconds. Oh god what if he refuses!?
'Sounds like a plan! Chilli dogs ok with you?' he took my hand. His touch was so gentle, it reminded me of Maria…this is no time to get all sad shadow! Stay in focus! Together we ran towards the park where a chilli dog stand was located. This was basically a date!
I smirked; shadow 1, scourge 0.

Sonics pov
Oh my god! Is this really happening! Shadow has practically asked me on a date! This is so awesome! Ew. I AM starting to sound like Amy! I was snapped out of my thoughts when shadow stopped. I looked at him confused until I noticed we were right outside the chilidog stand. My mouth started to water at the smell of those irresistible chilli dogs!

shadow pov
'Hey shads, I'll go get us some chilli dogs 'Kay? Wait here!' I nodded before he ran off. I didn't particularly like chilli dogs. All it is is a hot dog in a bun covered with terrible sauce, but I could make an exception just this once. I sat down on a nearby bench and watched sonic order the chilli dogs from afar. I loved being able to watch him from a distance. I could look at the way he walked, smiled and talked without him thinking I'm a stalker (which I'm not.) I was so lost in my thoughts that it took me awhile to hear an annoying call from behind me.
'Ssshhhhaaaddoooow!' the voice, I recognised it. It was high pitched and nerdy sounding. Ugh. Last person I wanted to see right now-no make that ever.
I turned around to see silver smiling stupidly at me. Why did he have to arrive now!? I had sonic all to myself yet this idiot had to come and ruin everything!
'What the hell are you doing here silver?' I spat he just grinned at me and sat down on the spare seat across from me.
'Just wanted to say hi, it's not often I see you sitting at a chilli dog stand! It could only mean one thing…' he paused and leaned in closer to my face 'you're finally on a date with sonniku!' I blushed and growled at him. Idiot! How did he know!?

Scourge pov
I had been running forever! I had looked all over the forest, the town and even their houses! Fuck! I was about to give up when I noticed a park in the distance. Heh, it seems like a good place to rest for a bit. I made my way over and sat next to a tree. Jesus, I have gotten myself into a BIG mess. I'm not one to keep commitments, hell, I don't think I've ever been in a serious relationship and I've never liked someone enough to want to date them for any longer than a week, but with blue, its different. When I see him my knees buckle and I can't breathe…I'm no expert but I think its love. Shit. I'm to young and sexy to fall in love! , of course, sonic is pretty sexy too…heh, I can't wait until I can ravish him in bed! I smirked, perverted thought filling my mind. I turned my head to view the park. It was quite peaceful, not many people here except for those three hedgehogs….wait a minute…it's sonic! And shadow! TOGETHER!? They better not be on a fucking date! Jealously was overpowering me with every second. How dare shadow do that! I ought 'a go over there and kick his sorry excuse for an ass! But who's that third hedgehog? Silver I think his name was. Is he out for Sonics love as well!? If he is, things aren't gonna end nicely. Damn, it looks like there in the lead to winning blues heart! I need a plan…I've got it! If this goes well, he will be mine! I could feel my smirk grow even wider, oohhh I am too good! I got up and ran away to get my plan in place.

Sonics pov
That cue was huge! Oh well, at least I had the chilli dogs. I looked in the direction of where shads was sitting and saw silver smiling and leaning into him. Oh no! Does silver like shadow! Crraaap! What am I gonna do!? I know!, I just gotta play it cool, I mean, I don't know for sure if he does yet…it's probably just me getting jealous. I smiled as I approached them
'Here's your chili dog shads!' I passed the food to shadow then swallowed mine whole (don't ask how I do it, it's a skill) I faced silver who gave me a smile
'Hey sonic, I was just passing through! I don't want to interrupt anything…' he winked at shads then ran off. I sighed in relief, at least he's away from my shadow! I sat down and laughed at shadow who looked like he was gonna puke from eating his chilli dog. He saw me laughing and blushed a little. He looked so cute! But scourge was cute-wait. What!? Why am I thinking like this about scourge!? I must be going crazy!
'I found evidence of a chaos emerald on the beach…did y-you want to assist me in searching for it?'
I looked over at shadow who had his face turned away from me, but with a blush still showing on his cheeks. I giggled. Was he asking me out!? This is so awesome! My dream-come true! I could squeal!
'Sure shads, When?' I had to keep cool! I didn't want to ruin this by going all Amy-Rose on him.
'Tomorrow…we'll meet at your house…' I could feel my cheeks get redder and redder!
'o-ok sure' I swallowed. He stood up and smiled. HE DID WHAT?! Oh my god! Shads never smiles! It's a miracle! His smile was so…so perfect! I think my heart just melted…
'I'll see you tomorrow…sonic'  with that he sped off. He just called me by my name…THE WORLD IS ENDING! I got up and began running home. Today had gotten even weirder!  Shads smiled AND called me sonic! Does this mean…he likes me? It's too soon to say now…I guess I'll find out for sure tomorrow!

Scourge pov
There he was! Now's my chance to get my awesome plan going! I stepped in front of him causing him to skid to a stop.
'Scourge, You could of gotten flattened! Why di-'before he could say anymore I gagged him with a cloth doused in a sleeping drug. Heh heh, it's going nicely so far! I picked blue up and slung him over my shoulder. Now all I need to do is take him to the abandoned building!

To be continued…

Sorry for the OOC-ness (I don't really know how silver acts considering I haven't played sonic 06 yet)
I hope this chapter was alright… thanks for reading ^^
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Description: scourge and shadow are determined to win over sonic, even if it means battling to the death! how will sonic cope with 2 love crazed hedgehogs? sonadow sonourge yaoi

ch1: ellatron3000.deviantart.com/ar…

ch 3: (deleted from dA) --read here:  archiveofourown.org/works/9974…
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:iconprincess-vitany:
Princess-Vitany Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
i need chapter 4 its my favourite story
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stanspots Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist
Hi because chapter 3 was removed i am asking for chapter 4 please
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CoolHaze Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
PLEASE CONTINUE I'M DYING..... Even though I had already said that the first three had killed me.... BUT PLEASE FINISH IT. I DON'T CARE WHO (even if it is both Shadow and Scourge) GETS SONIC BUT KNOW YOUR ENDING OF THIS STORY....

PLEASE I'M DYING TO CONTINUE READING YA AMAZING WORK ;)
(Please don't take me serious with the dying, though. Just me being DramaticMe/D.M again) ;P hahaha
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:iconsonadowlover00000001:
When are you gonna make chapter 3??
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:iconcoolhaze:
CoolHaze Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
Just asking....
Do you know that Chap. 3 is already out but there's a link above letting you read Chap. 3. Chap. 4 I have no idea with it sorry ;P hahaha
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:iconsonadowlover00000001:
No I haven't seen chapter 3 at all
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:iconcoolhaze:
CoolHaze Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
I hope that you have found it
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:iconsonadowlover00000001:
i did it was really good
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:iconcoolhaze:
CoolHaze Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015
GOOD TO HEAR :D
.... Right now I'm dying to know the next one ;P hahaha :tombstone:
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:iconsonadowlover00000001:
i understand what you mean I have just begun writing stories and i'm trying to write a chapter 2 for a sonadow story but I would also like to try writing a sonourge story I don't really know where to start for a sonourge  story
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CoolHaze Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015
Normally when I read any story... that is where some ideas come but then my imagination changes it into stories that I have but mostly unfinished ones...
I had about 3 started at the beginning of the year and now I have another two started and unfinished ;P haha
There are some short stories but most of my stories are long/chapter ones and all unfinished HAHAHAHA
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Fangililla Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
YOU MUST MAKE MORE!!!
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:iconfangililla:
Fangililla Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
AWSOME oh ya silver is a esy going guy he dosent studer or anything but you got it pretty close!!!!!!! AWSOME WORK
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:iconfangililla:
Fangililla Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
NO!
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CoolHaze Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
all three that i've read so far:
KILLED ME I'll be your huckleberry!  
I hope that you'll finish this story, it's really AWESOME ;)
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Poke-Chan145 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
If you did make the chapter, can ya send it to me by note?
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SeanTheKitty Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
whens the next one coming out i cant wait!!
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tjbunnylove Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Student Filmographer
awesome please alert when you will be making a part 4!!!Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Lovely Mode) [V6] Scourge the Hedgehog Run Sonic Battle run 
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derpyfox101 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read the whole story so far, I just wanted to read it again CX
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66Alex66 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
MOAR! MOAR! WE. ALL WANT A CHAPTER 4!
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Jennythehedgehog19 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hope shadow wins!!! XD
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:iconanimal-lover-1:
Animal-lover-1 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
PLZ tell me u will make a ch. 4
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LeopardfootWarrior Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Whoa, chapter three was crazy. Did you make a chapter four? I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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scar191817 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please have scourge
win sinikuu please*puppy eyes with a tear*
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:iconfangililla:
Fangililla Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
NO he must be with shadow
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scar191817 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
NO SONOURGE FTW :la:
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:iconfangililla:
Fangililla Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
NO SHADOW I SHALL HIT YOU WITH A CHOSE SPEAR!!!
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scar191817 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
HAIL TO KING SCOURGE
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:iconfangililla:
Fangililla Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
NO YOU SHAL BOW TO SHADOW!!!!!!!!!
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scar191817 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
SCOURGE RULES THE UNIVERSE 
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:iconfangililla:
Fangililla Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
NO SHADOW fyi in my book I just made scourge gets killed soon!! HA
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Kiki2222 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Ch 4?
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Chaosmaker329 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Oh ok thanks
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Chaosmaker329 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Chapter 3 got deleted aaaaahhhhhhhhh!!! Can u fix it please?
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Sonikku-Yaoi Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry dA admins deleted my work as they thought it was inappropriate ^^'

ive linked the 3rd chapter in the description though ^^
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cuteitachilove Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
The world is ending hhhhhhhh nice *winks*
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knuckxadelover Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Artist
Silver has diffrent personality's he has his stuburned and nice one and his shy,sweet and cute one but i like his shy one ^w^
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redichiyami Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
1000 % FANGIRL MoDE!! XD :heart:
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahahaha scourge is a phsyco amy,Sally,and shads would hunt him down and kick his ass!
Me:*giggle* I'm trying hard not to but I'm going fangirl here
Shad: LET GO SONIC IS MINE!
Scourge:NO HE'S MINE!!
Sonic: owowow *being pulled*
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furrykittys Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Student General Artist
holey drit tree save us if not then.... me kittas
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Blissthehedgehog Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student
I wonder what Shadow will say when he finds out Sonic was kidnapped? or hedgenapped? HA! I bet he'll open a can of ass kicking on Scourge!!! This will be fun! please make more.
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ari-loves-sasunaru Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student
dey kinda sound like sasuke n naruto lol X3 by d way i like ur story =)
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BlackWingsGirl Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i ove it :D
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chocoletbanana Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
i love the bit with silver
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SONADOWFANGIRL22 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
Omg i luv this story... N the next 1 2
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Anime-Girl222 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Thank you so much for putting your story on my note because it was mature filtered and I just wanted to read your story.:huggle: thanks a lot for doing this I really appreciate it
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:iconroxythecrazyhedgehog:
omg i really love it!!!
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RaimiWolf96 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great story. i cant wait till next arrives.
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Anime-Girl222 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
Awesome story!!!!! More please:iconiloveitplz:
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Anime-Girl222 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
AWESOME STORY!!!!!! More please:iconiloveitplz:
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